Response to my feeback:

After reading all of my comments I am going to play around with my front cover and possibly add something to the background instead of using the plain white, I will also be looking at different features and try to make it look more conventional. I will also look at more things I can add to make it look as realistic as possible. Overall I am pleased with my feedback and will work harder to make my blog even better by adding as many posts relating to my magazine as possible.