Final contents page:

This is my final contents page that I produced after receiving my feedback from my teacher and peers. I decided to come up with something different as I felt unhappy with my other one. Overall I am pleased with how this one has worked as I think it follows conventions and I have tried to maintain/ re-in force the realism of it throughout my progress.

Contents page process after feedback:

Main contents page inspiration/conventions.

Response from feedback:

After looking at my peer feedback I have seen that I need to make some major changes to my layout to clear the space, I also need to take my images into consideration and look at changing them, and adding an image of my main cover story. I am also going to look at adding extra features to make it look more conventional and to maximise the realism of my magazine. I am going to play around with my whole contents layout until I get a layout that looks conventional.

Peer Feedback:

Peer Feedback Lauren Bird

• Good colour scheme that fits the genre
• simple and well layed out
• Possibly add a few other things such as a letter from the editor to fill the blank space

Peer Feed Back - Liam Biglin

Strenghts - very conventional - good number of picture - good layout - includes page numbers (which stand out) - fits colour scheme
Improvements - use own pictures - maybe use a better font

Peer Feedback

Kenneth Wilkinson
Strengths:

• Clear layout so the infomation is easy to read
• There is more than one image relating to the different articles

Areas for improvement:

• Maybe add more features or competitions